Starpack – Heinz Brief | YCN – Nescafe Azera | Work Based Learning – “Cockernhoe Village Fate” Poster | FMP?
Feedback: Stand up, don’t need FMP, handouts – scan in and put on presentation, bullet points, project your voice, explain Starpack, tweak images. Make it more succinct. Add marker visuals??
“Finding my feet” | YCN – Boost | Visual Arts Gallery Logo | Work Experience – R.S Signs | “My Future”
Feedback: Use animation somewhere in your presentation, show more YCN slides, include Starpack and explain re-branding (over Summer) – Future.
MESH | Cockernhoe | 4:01 Show
Feedback: Like all three together. Show some of the video, add images/screen shots, good choice of topics.
Starpack | Work Placement | Portfolio
Feedback: Ran a little long, don’t say every quote – summarise. Did I miss out Benson Group? Add marker visuals?
MESH | Starpack | YCN | Freelance (book cover)
Feedback: Over run, needs to summarise – have much more information on the slides. Key layouts.